Daystar
She wanted a little room for thinking:
but she saw diapers steaming on the line,
a doll slumped behind the door.
So she lugged a chair behind the garage
to sit out the children's naps.
Sometimes there were things to watch-
the pinched armor of a vanished cricket,
a floating maple leaf. Other days
she stared until she was assured
when she closed her eyes
she'd see only her vivid own blood.
She had an hour, at best, before Liza appeared
pouting from the top of the stairs.
And just what was mother doing
out back with the field mice? Why,
building a palace. Later
that night when Thomas rolled over and
lurched into her, she would open her eyes
and think of the place that was hers
for an hour-where
she was nothing,
pure nothing, in the middle of the day.
In Daystar by Rita Dove the speaker
is talking about a mother. The situation that the poem develops around is
caring for children. Mothering in this poem is conveyed as a full-time job. The
speaker places us in the home of a mentally and emotionally exhausted mother
who works day in and day out for her children.
The
poem places the reader in a home full of complete disarray—“diapers steaming on
the line, a doll slumped behind the door” (2-3). The setting creates an image
of a messy house, run over by children. In this tiresome job the mother looks
forward to her one hour break mid-day when the children are asleep. She escapes
to the backyard, hidden behind the garage with the field mice. This simple
place is calm, and despite the almost boring simplicity it is a place of the
mother’s away from the children and away from the clutter—it is hers. She cherishes
her short, precious moments isolated behind the garage.
The
poem revolves around a mother’s daily events from cleaning diapers to having
intimate relations with her husband. Being a mother is a full time job; the
setting of the cluttered house and her single hour of isolation convey that
situation of a full time job. Just as a man working in a factory all day and receiving
a lunch break, she works in her home all day receiving an hour to herself in which
she enjoys in isolations with simple maple leaf floating before her.
Good attention to detail. Make connections throughout that build to an effective argument.
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